Carnival: the Final Frontier

March 26, 2019 Jhaye-Q Baptiste 0 Comments

Carnival is Storytelling


"They walk among us."

CREATIVE PEOPLE will always take creative license ... and always get dragged over the proverbial coals by some for what is deemed shifty storytelling elements. 

     So Stephanie Meyer, of the Twilight saga sensation, got flack for making vampires impervious to sunlight.
     Her twist was that they shunned the sun because they would, to quote the pop song, “Shine bright like a diamond.”
     Imaginative, but inane. It was not thoughtless, though. See, the saga was pure proselytizing for Mormonism and its tenets. As such, the chosen people, the vampires representing the Mormons, could not be so weak as to be undone by something equally God-created as themselves.
     Nay! In fact, they had to be as nigh well perfect as possible: so they were almost indestructible, except by their own kind (and those pesky werewolves ... who are actually shape-shifters in the Native American tradition) and, above all, beautiful. So they sparkle in the sunlight.
     And that’s why they hid in the dark all those centuries?
     I point out to my writing students, "That was then and this is now." Maybe it’s Maybelline’s perfect coverage; or Revlon’s true match spectrum – “Do you have this foundation in prismatic sapphire?; but make-up has “come a long way, baby” and can smooth over anything.
     Even if her vamps wanted some fun in the sun, these days that’s all-how doable. Vampires would be able to hit anything from the Gay Pride Parade, to Mardi Gras, to Rio’s superlative festival. After that, they could work their way south and "jump up" in each of the islands in the Caribbean with a carnival, culminating with the mother of them all: TnT Mas’.
     And don’t tell me Meyer may not have any clue about countries like mine! I see those Mormons walking around my streets looking like sales clerks in U.S. all-white department stores circa 1950s.
     A pal of mine, as a little girl loved telling the Mormon missionaries who came by, “God is a spaceman.”
     All those things got me thinking, so I wrote this:

Carnival & Alienation


Man from Mars
you danced among us
and we knew you not
Rays fell upon you
This Caribbean sun
run down you, but blinking, cold, like prey before driven snow
Mercury may be your blood
But what colour is your true, true skin?
I turn my head to take you in
Only to end up shielding my eyes
Thus, a peep-show, you and I
There are no stares in space?

Man from Mars
you dwarfed us
Our necks arced backwards to capture you in our lens
We will show the world that you were here
Which is not to say 

we have proof
The pieces of you 
that dress the Earth with
what you hide beneath
(Or are you actually made of this?)
Faking that you are feigning
All alien, after all
Sprouting what below the mask,
                                        the paint,
                                       the dust,
                                        the wire
What is your true, true shade?

Man of Mars
you carried our world on your head
Cranial carriage for human-made
pale impersonations of
Nature’s well-churned creations
Creatures donned, to hide
the creature of you
Horns, fangs, wings, tail
More, or less, like you on your bones?
Tentacle, tooth hurled from your form
like care-worn terrible things
gnash upon the skins of our
walk-and-wine drums 
with which we failed to warn each other
“They walk among us”
Never showing your true, true shape

Shine on 
"Only to end up shielding my eyes."


"Cranial carriage"


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"Our necks arced backwards to capture you"